Faceless
Haiku for daily-prompt, word – faceless
Woman. Night. Cold hands.
She says ‘Action time. Don’t move’.
Soaked in the faceless love.
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Living in Sweden. Awesome. Happy. Writing. Ayurvedic food. Healthy lifestyle. Dogs. Literature. Drawing. Meditation/Yoga.
I get the feel you could go on with this. 😀 Maybe another verse or two. 😀
Lol i could, but I’m on the way out with the dogs haha…😬😉✌️
When you get back. 😀
Lol Nope 🙂 Maybe next week 😂✌️
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Super Haiku, Ray
Thank u 💓💓😉
Love the shoes
Wow! This was a fantastic Haiku! 🙂
💓💓 Thank u
This may well be the first time I’ve read a Haiku more than once – and get a different take each time!
😬✌️ haha There’re at least 2 meanings 🙂 but maybe even more…🙃
Brevity in knee high boots, outstanding!
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Great post dear.
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Awesome Ray. Wonderful senryu.
😄👋💓 Thx lots
Excellent! My humble opinion: no need for more words. Bravo!
💜💜 Thx 🙂 Agreed with ur opinion 😉
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“soaked in the faceless love….” That leaves an opening for many thoughts and many endings that could happen after this Haiku ends…
thank you :)) 😊 agreed with you ✌️❤️
I hate being “that guy” but your MARVELOUS haiku is 5-7-6, not 5-7-5 :/
Still a great poem though.
yes I know 🙂 lol I have syllables counter 🙂 I’m just lazy to fix it and all on my blog r *raw* writings 😂✌️ just enjoy the vibe!
and thx for noticing anyway :)🙈
“Haikus are real fun:
But they don’t always make sense.
Refrigerator.”
Haha 😂 cool one 👍👍👍
I am digging the vibe and enjoying it thoroughly! 😀
💜💜💜 btw, i can’t open ur page, even thru reader…says it doesn’t exist or not available 👀🤨
Whhhaaaaaaaa?! I will have to figure out how to remedy this! In the mean time, since you’re interested (<3) http://seejaystark.wordpress.com
Yes Thx for the link:)
Hmmm… good one. Kind of sad.
✌️💓 yes it is ;))
Poetry has no limits on syllables 🙂
True :)) let’s say it is a modern kind of haiku 🙂
Love it !
A faceless love…that’s an intriguing thought. 🙂 🙂
Great Haiku!❤❤❤
Moving, without movement- and yes, great pair of shoes!
Haha faceless shoes would be a perfect name :)) thx
I think it was Bob Dylan who said in some liner notes that a poem is “a naked person.” cm
yes, I’ve heard that phrase 🙂 hopefully I look like a goodness when Im naked lol